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I Am in Love by Mumtazzaidi I Am in Love by Mumtazzaidi
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I am in LOVE

my own idea

Thank to: ~Cynthetic & ~KeitoSanStock


===== Request for Critiques ====



Saddens me every time I hear your name,
Racing thoughts in my head left unexplained.
I understand how much my heart means to you,
Seems my heart wont let your emotions through.

It kills you inside waiting on those words,
Something I hold in that wont be heard.
You tell me how much we are meant to be,
Truthfully, my heart is scared of being happy.

Everyday you call me asking how I am,
Not knowing deep inside, I try as much as I can.
Please open those beautiful eyes and see,
I can never love you as much as you love me.

I can't express to you the way my heart feels,
Compared to you I don't believe anythings real.
My emotions for you I wont seem to let show,
A bleeding heart for I know you wont let me go.

How can I have a man in front of my face,
Wanting to be with me always in no other place.
I'm ashamed of myself wasting all your time,
You are praying for the day I make you mine.

Baby I try extremely hard to always be there,
However it is nothing from everything you've shared.
Wondering when my daily wish will come true,
The day my heart speaks back I love you too.
Poem by: Zeenat [link]

Heart of Egg [link]
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:iconfirefoxessmoon:
This idea of a fried egg loving another fried egg just amuses me! The shape of the love heart seems very well blended in. Heck! So does the face! Though it obviously obvious the face is comical.

A few crits though. The camera makes the photo slightly grainy, and so the image looses the humourus effect slightly. Also because of the camera, the rose looks as though it isn't really there, as though it is a photomanipulation or whatever they're called. And in some ways, I believe the background isn't very fitting. I reckon it should be a frying pan. But that's my own opinion.

Apart from these though, I know this is a great image! Even now I'm still laughing at the crazy idea of two fried eggs falling in love! :giggle:
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Maxoooow Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whaha really nice & funny at the same time!
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YelianaYella Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010
Omg! how is this that cute! wonderful idea! sweet poem, lovely <3
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
Thank you, much appreciate
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:iconvenusinamarciana:
VenusinaMarciana Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
I must say.... They look tasty XD, i guess love is tasty too XD

The poem i think is very beautyfull too.
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
Thank you so much :hug:
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:iconfilemanager:
filemanager Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009  Professional Photographer
Hilarious!
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
many thanks
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NynaOrchyd Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2009
So cute! And funny too, great idea!
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2009
many thanks :hug:
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:iconaktsukineko:
aktsukineko Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
This is way too funny, LOL. :XD:
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
many thanks
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:iconaleksandra91:
AlekSandra91 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
Awsome! :floating:
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
Thanks
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:iconaleksandra91:
AlekSandra91 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
Anytime! :D
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:iconkarolinpettenkoffer:
KarolinPettenkoffer Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
Great idea!:D
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Thank you so much :love:
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:iconmisschaudhry:
misschaudhry Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009   Traditional Artist
sooo cute :)
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
Thank you so much :love:
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:iconmamfi1908:
mamfi1908 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
nice
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
Thanks :XD:
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:iconmamfi1908:
mamfi1908 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
np
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chazzsgirl4ever Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009
Oh my gosh! X3 Thats so cute lol
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009
Thanks Chazzs
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:iconchazzsgirl4ever:
chazzsgirl4ever Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
Your welcome :3
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:iconfruo0om:
Fruo0om Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
NICE
FUNY AND LOVLY IN THE SAME TIME
:)
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:iconmuslima78692:
Muslima78692 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
Poor chick
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
:giggle:
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:iconstillbrown84:
sTiLLbROWN84 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
haha mum this is awsome!! i love how the two eggs are in love, beautifully done :)
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
Thanks
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:iconprowlerz:
ProwlerZ Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
funnyyyyy=D
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
:XD:
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JacquesJARVIS Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
cool
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Thanks
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SuperSonic104 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
This is excellent work, the whole idea I find amusing. :giggle: Cant wait to see more work in the future. :icondragonnod1:
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Thanks friend
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SuperSonic104 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
^^
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YoshixWolfxLover Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009   Traditional Artist
Squee!>w< So cute & fuuny!Sweet aswell!
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Thank you so much Yoshix
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YoshixWolfxLover Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009   Traditional Artist
Chu welcomez :3
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Seliex Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I saw this and thought it was really cute. I can't help but wonder how you did it though. Great job. :)
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Thanks Seliex
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Seliex Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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:iconkaceek:
Kaceek Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
Cute xD
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
:XD:
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:iconami-dragon:
Ami-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009  Student Digital Artist
lol this is so awesome picture! :meow:
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
Thanks Ami
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:iconami-dragon:
Ami-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome! ;)
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knee-cole-98 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
wow, you are very talented.
and sorry for the late comment, as you told me to comment a while ago. :XD: haa. :peace: :rofl: and +++ you have a fantastic gallery. good work!
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:iconmumtazzaidi:
Mumtazzaidi Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
Thank you so much for your comments
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Rainbow-Closet Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
luv is in the air, <3 it ^-^
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