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===== Request for Critiques ====
I am in LOVE
my own idea
Thank to: ~Cynthetic & ~KeitoSanStock
===== Request for Critiques ====
Saddens me every time I hear your name,
Racing thoughts in my head left unexplained.
I understand how much my heart means to you,
Seems my heart wont let your emotions through.
It kills you inside waiting on those words,
Something I hold in that wont be heard.
You tell me how much we are meant to be,
Truthfully, my heart is scared of being happy.
Everyday you call me asking how I am,
Not knowing deep inside, I try as much as I can.
Please open those beautiful eyes and see,
I can never love you as much as you love me.
I can't express to you the way my heart feels,
Compared to you I don't believe anythings real.
My emotions for you I wont seem to let show,
A bleeding heart for I know you wont let me go.
How can I have a man in front of my face,
Wanting to be with me always in no other place.
I'm ashamed of myself wasting all your time,
You are praying for the day I make you mine.
Baby I try extremely hard to always be there,
However it is nothing from everything you've shared.
Wondering when my daily wish will come true,
The day my heart speaks back I love you too.
Poem by: Zeenat [link]
Heart of Egg [link]
I am in LOVE
my own idea
Thank to: ~Cynthetic & ~KeitoSanStock
===== Request for Critiques ====
Saddens me every time I hear your name,
Racing thoughts in my head left unexplained.
I understand how much my heart means to you,
Seems my heart wont let your emotions through.
It kills you inside waiting on those words,
Something I hold in that wont be heard.
You tell me how much we are meant to be,
Truthfully, my heart is scared of being happy.
Everyday you call me asking how I am,
Not knowing deep inside, I try as much as I can.
Please open those beautiful eyes and see,
I can never love you as much as you love me.
I can't express to you the way my heart feels,
Compared to you I don't believe anythings real.
My emotions for you I wont seem to let show,
A bleeding heart for I know you wont let me go.
How can I have a man in front of my face,
Wanting to be with me always in no other place.
I'm ashamed of myself wasting all your time,
You are praying for the day I make you mine.
Baby I try extremely hard to always be there,
However it is nothing from everything you've shared.
Wondering when my daily wish will come true,
The day my heart speaks back I love you too.
Poem by: Zeenat [link]
Heart of Egg [link]
Image size
756x571px 120.49 KB
Make
FUJIFILM
Model
FinePix2650
Shutter Speed
1/18 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 12, 2004, 10:28:04 AM
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Overall Vision Originality Technique
ImpactThis idea of a fried egg loving another fried egg just amuses me! The shape of the love heart seems very well blended in. Heck! So does the face! Though it obviously obvious the face is comical.
A few crits though. The camera makes the photo slightly grainy, and so the image looses the humourus effect slightly. Also because of the camera, the rose looks as though it isn't really there, as though it is a photomanipulation or whatever they're called. And in some ways, I believe the background isn't very fitting. I reckon it should be a frying pan. But that's my own opinion.
Apart from these though, I know this is a great image! Even now I'm still laughing at the crazy idea of two fried eggs falling in love! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt="
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